Shadows Follow the Lonesome

[Ryuwar6]

Darkness of our loneliness takes form of us,
Following us, haunting us, making us insane,
They grow and grow as the day goes on.
Seeming harmless as a fawn.
Though Shadows have no danger,
Demons lives live on anger.
Hatred of ourselves for not being perfect,
We ask ourselves "Is it worth it?"
Shadows follow us,
Making us insane.
We feel ourselves...
Was it all in vain?
I can't see,
the other side,
So is it where we strive?
Mankind is so fucked up.
Just know...
Shadows follow the lonesome.
Why can't we all be the same?
If anything, we're all insane...
But why are we all divided
If we all need to be invited.
Warmth of mankind has come and gone,
Forever and ever so slowly fallen.
My heart of darkness...
Has gotten the shadow.
For Shadows follow the lonesome.....

I made this poem ^_^. It's not good but it's fairly decent. I wrote it a few days ago and please leave me some feedback. Anyway I'll write more later on so please look forward to those!!! Thanks for you time

-Joey

 

[Ozzie]

Looks pretty good, Joey. I look forward to reading some more of your stuff.

 

[Ryuwar6]

Thanks Ozzie

 

[2091401]

Depressing and dark, but it was actually pretty good.

I'd love to see more from you, though. I'm a fan of poetry.

 

[Ryuwar6]

Thanks 209 I'm writing right now as I'm typing this haha

 

[bestwriter]

I liked your poem.

It talks of our own thoughts that make us what we are. Loneliness is a dark cloud that follows us everywhere unless we just ignore it and move on.